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Commission: SchoolGirl by JamGirl0808 Commission: SchoolGirl by JamGirl0808
A commission for :iconkenty1234: he wanted a girl in uniform but it could be of anyone so I thought bunny Kiki would be appropriate~ Plus I haven't drawn her in FOREVEEERRR
Why does this picture look *GENZOMAN influenced....

RUINING MY MIND MAN

Only two more to go ~u~
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Bunny Kiki from the Webcomic:
I Dream of Easter

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:iconviistar:
firstly, i think the pose and low camera angle in this piece are really fun. they are playful and have a lot of energy! the secondary motion in her skirt and purse follow through with her leap and accentuation the motion.

there are a few thing that would make this piece stronger. the first being to control the intensity of your shadows. some shadows are really dark, while others are very light, and then there are other areas that should be shaded that have none at all. the more intense the light, the darker the shadow will be.

consolidate the light source and block it in before adding details. it might help if you choose a direction that if friendly to the chosen pose (as in not shading the face)

also keep in mind that dark, warm things generally come forward, while light, cool things will recede. lightening the tree and adding the color of the sky with push it above her, while darkening her left foot while lightening her right leg will make it look more dimensional. the same for the rest of the environment.

lastly, keep in mind the pattern of value and temperature. she gets lost in the light sky with her white outfit - cooling the sky would make her pop out from it, and the same with her brown purse, darkening it and lightening/ cooling the tree would have the same effect.

other than that it's looking good! keep it up ^^

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:icongasparnolasco:
GasparNolasco Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012   Digital Artist
I like her expression. Also nice work with the hair.
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:iconangemonia:
Angemonia Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
So sweet ♥
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:iconangeliiy:
angeliIy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012   Artist
O_O AMAZINGLY STRIKING. THOSE COLORS!
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:icondesdinova84:
Desdinova84 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
She got 2 right feet.
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:iconlior-art:
Lior-Art Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this one :heart::love:
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:icon84-29388498905029375:
84-29388498905029375 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011   Digital Artist
This is amazing! Love how free-flowing the lines are.
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:icontajii-chan:
Tajii-chan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What an adorable piece! ;D :heart: So sweet and fun! :heart:

It's been featured here: [link]

:glomp:
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:iconmarshmannie:
MarshMannie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohgodtheeyes
OHGODTHEEYES <3333
this is so beautiful i can't even
i was going through my old folders yesterday
and i found some of your old art
and i looked at it then looked at this
and it blew my mind
you are insanely awesome and have come so far ;3;
-sobs and hugs you-
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:iconmangatellers:
Mangatellers Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the drawing and the coloring. The BG looks amazingand the outfit is great. Welldone. ^^
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:iconbirdie121:
Birdie121 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome drawing! I love the coloring!
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:iconcarff:
carff Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
FFFFF I WANT UR SKILLS
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:iconhatta-san:
Hatta-san Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
So cute!
I love her eyes :heart:
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:iconselph94:
Selph94 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
WOWOWOW
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:iconxtweedlexdum:
xTweedlexDum Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist
so cute! =D
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:iconduskninjakenji:
DuskNinjaKenji Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Student Filmographer
Very cute~
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:iconadrianodevilio:
adrianodevilio Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
nice i do like the grass going in to curve to the middle and girl image wonderfull
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:iconsupersmurgger:
SuperSmurgger Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I totaly love it !!!! The coloring and shading details just take my breath away !!! :wow::clap:
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:iconstumx:
StuMx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
She reminds me Molly Hayes from Runaways
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:iconwhite-mist:
White-Mist Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
I love the hair and the highlights on the skirt! ^_^
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:iconyuisa:
yuisa Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Digital Artist
so cute,
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:icontwinklepowderysnow:
TwinklePowderySnow Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! I love how you colour C:
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:iconmosama:
Mosama Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
Wait is that a bellybutton i see on her back??? Beautiful coloring btw!
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:iconmyunjin:
myunjin Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
So cute !
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:icontenaciousmug:
TenaciousMug Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
Aww this is adorable. ;3 I love her outfit.
Is this for the Year of the Rabbit? C:
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:iconjamgirl0808:
JamGirl0808 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011   Digital Artist
Yuh huh c:
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:iconnichaart:
NichaART Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
So cute
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:icona-teinna:
A-teinna Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is lovely :D
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:iconfrey-ofthe-arcane:
Frey-ofthe-Arcane Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Hee hee, very cute ^ ^
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:iconoweeo:
Oweeo Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
shes adorable! can i ask, what did you use to paint this?
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:iconjamgirl0808:
JamGirl0808 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011   Digital Artist
I used Easy Paint Tool Sai c:
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:iconongaku-chudoku-osaki:
Ongaku-Chudoku-Osaki Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
aww, this is adorable.:love:
great job:)
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:iconamethisttheelf:
AmethistTheElf Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the colours are amazing!!! good job!
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:icontwinslife:
twinslife Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely <3
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:iconkellobear:
KelloBear Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student General Artist
This is adorable!~
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:iconmintwinter:
mintwinter Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool *3*
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:iconjamgirl0808:
JamGirl0808 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Digital Artist
Thanks C:
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:iconmintwinter:
mintwinter Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcam *3*
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:iconrobertklem:
RobertKlem Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful work! :)
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:iconjamgirl0808:
JamGirl0808 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Digital Artist
Thank you~:heart:
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