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Commission: SchoolGirl by JamGirl0808 Commission: SchoolGirl by JamGirl0808
A commission for :iconkenty1234: he wanted a girl in uniform but it could be of anyone so I thought bunny Kiki would be appropriate~ Plus I haven't drawn her in FOREVEEERRR
Why does this picture look *GENZOMAN influenced....

RUINING MY MIND MAN

Only two more to go ~u~
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Bunny Kiki from the Webcomic:
I Dream of Easter

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:iconviistar:
firstly, i think the pose and low camera angle in this piece are really fun. they are playful and have a lot of energy! the secondary motion in her skirt and purse follow through with her leap and accentuation the motion.

there are a few thing that would make this piece stronger. the first being to control the intensity of your shadows. some shadows are really dark, while others are very light, and then there are other areas that should be shaded that have none at all. the more intense the light, the darker the shadow will be.

consolidate the light source and block it in before adding details. it might help if you choose a direction that if friendly to the chosen pose (as in not shading the face)

also keep in mind that dark, warm things generally come forward, while light, cool things will recede. lightening the tree and adding the color of the sky with push it above her, while darkening her left foot while lightening her right leg will make it look more dimensional. the same for the rest of the environment.

lastly, keep in mind the pattern of value and temperature. she gets lost in the light sky with her white outfit - cooling the sky would make her pop out from it, and the same with her brown purse, darkening it and lightening/ cooling the tree would have the same effect.

other than that it's looking good! keep it up ^^

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GasparNolasco Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012   Digital Artist
I like her expression. Also nice work with the hair.
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Angemonia Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
So sweet ♥
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angeliIy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012   Artist
O_O AMAZINGLY STRIKING. THOSE COLORS!
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Desdinova84 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
She got 2 right feet.
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Lior-Art Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this one :heart::love:
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84-29388498905029375 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011   Digital Artist
This is amazing! Love how free-flowing the lines are.
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Tajii-chan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What an adorable piece! ;D :heart: So sweet and fun! :heart:

It's been featured here: [link]

:glomp:
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MarshMannie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohgodtheeyes
OHGODTHEEYES <3333
this is so beautiful i can't even
i was going through my old folders yesterday
and i found some of your old art
and i looked at it then looked at this
and it blew my mind
you are insanely awesome and have come so far ;3;
-sobs and hugs you-
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Mangatellers Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the drawing and the coloring. The BG looks amazingand the outfit is great. Welldone. ^^
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